Obviously you care about your series and you already have a general idea of what you want to accomplish. Like what other people have said: show, don't tell, for a while the plot is exposed entirely through text.
Another thing, if you're gonna have background music, PLEASE choose better songs (Audio Portal has a wide selection of them) and make sure the audio levels aren't peaking.
Reading your responses, it's refreshing seeing that you're taking all of these negative reviews very well, but these would really be much better with less exposition via text, though you said it gets better soon.
And yeah it is a fairly big risk you're taking by uploading these old ones, you're better off polishing these up. Even basic things like text scrolling on a screen could be improved with a nice color scheme, http://colorcombos.com
My only advice is to make these more presentable, you have an interesting story here.