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Wow.

This was a pretty big improvement over your last few flashes, I really liked it. The animation was amazingly done, it's clear you put a lot of time and effort into animating this, and it definitely paid off. All of the frame-by-frame animation was pleasing to look at and great.

The writing aspect of it was particularly funny. Great job on this. Keep up the good work!

sweetcommando responds:

thanks dude. really appreciate your review :)

Love the art and animation, a very enjoyable watch. Keep up the good work!

Pop-Tart responds:

thnx!

A genuine effort, although it still needs some work.

The direction and flow of the shots is actually well done, and definitely a step up from your previous work; in fact, the whole thing functions quite well as an animatic or a rough draft, but it would be even better if the line quality was smoother and cleaner.

I think 40 is the best smoothing, since it's not too rough, yet Flash typically doesn't mess up the lines you draw in 40 smoothing. The line quality here varies from fairly small to very thick, I'm talking specifically about Dexter's tail at 0:34.

The shot right after that at 0:38 is unnecessarily wobbly, and it would be a big improvement if you just kept one of the frames, though instead this gives it a sort of amateurish feel. Some of the frame-by-frame animation could use more inbetweens - the more, the better it looks.

In conclusion, it's a genuine effort and a step up in terms of direction and flow. The only thing that needs work at this point is the animation, specifically the line quality. Good luck on your future projects.

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thanks

Great.

I was looking forward to this when I read that you were announcing a second season full of 10-minute episodes, and it didn't disappoint. The animation quality's a noticeable step up from the previous episodes. The backgrounds and character models are polished, and nice to look at.

Bottom line: I enjoyed it; it was a breath of fresh air here on NG and the unique brand of humor this series has - can't wait for next week's episode.

4.5/5

Pretty well put together, decent voice acting. 4/5

EienStrife responds:

Thanks! Already see somethings that we will try different next time. Appreciate the feedback!

i've seen some of your ss stuff, this was really good, keep it up

Ying-yong responds:

That's some vintage cartooning you've seen! Thank you so much.

Insanely polished animation. Nice job.

wow wow kool animatin dood this was like relly funny plz tell me were do u get flash? i hear it costz 400 dollers but i aint spending dat mony! XD this was hilarious im roflmfaoing pls teach me flash pls???

IronHeadShot responds:

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I've been following your work for a while and I really like it. Every video's funny, and the ideas are solid. Loved this one too, especially the uncle part. The animation, while nothing overly complex, got the jokes across, which is all that matters. The sound quality was also excellent. I look forward to seeing more from you.

I'm not really a fan of random humor, though this was pretty good for what it is. The art needs polishing, though the animation was well done and did the job.

The frame-by-frame was smooth and looked good. The concept was solid and well-executed. Overall, this was pretty good, and I look forward to seeing more from you.

UNP responds:

I am warmfully pleased with your one of a kind assitance. I, myself, can do a better job on practising and being more creative, but that will eventually become natural as I go.

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