please read the whole review~
I must say that since the past few weeks, your artwork has really improved and it's nice to see your evolution as an artist. This is a huge step up from your previous works. I'm quite impressed to see such fast improvement, actually.
I will start by saying that for future reference, it is spelled "artwork" and not "art work."
now that i said that, I guess i'll start by critiquing each individual picture.
The first picture looks great. i like Willie D's pose and how he has his hands in his pockets. that was drawn well and i couldn't do better myself. Something you can work on though is the color of the guy on the right. he has... green skin? that's okay, but the building in the background is the same color as his skin.
the golden background rule is: the background has to be brighter than the characters or darker.
backgrounds need vanishing points
vanishing points are basically points in the artwork where you can see where the perspective sort of disappears
you should look at pictures of roads, maybe you'll see what i mean by "vanishing point"
The second picture is good, though the color of the sky has to be brighter or darker than the color of Willie D's shirt.
In the third picture, Dexter's head is a little too big. the fourth and fifth pictures are good.
the hand in the sixth picture can be improved. there doesn't appear to be a wrist. when drawing hands keep in mind that there's the arm, the wrist (important) and the hand, otherwise it will look a little odd.
in the 7th picture it's the same pose for the third time, i suggest redrawing it maybe?
in 8th picture the guy on the right's head is too big.
9th picture - where is his feet?
10th picture - i can see what you're trying to do, you're trying to make dexter walk towards the camera, though he has to be further away from Willie D to accomplish that look
11th picture - the hat looks weird. you may wanna go to google images for a guy with a backwards cap for reference material.
**tip: reference material is a must for everything!! if you can't draw something, learn how to draw it and get reference material**
12th picture - Willie D doesn't look the same here
13th picture - cute
this was a jam-packed slideshow at 13 great pictures all full of variety.
it's a great showcase of your artwork and i like it better in a slideshow than in the art portal. it's more convenient like this.
never give up
keep trying
good luck in your future endeavors!
4/5