MistyE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[iPhone 5]

Pretty poor.

Judging by the reviews below me, the only reason you're getting any positive marks for this is because they have the same opinion as you. The satire here was poorly done and it was too obviously conveyed that it lost its entertainment value.

Your characters look decent enough. Unfortunately, they suffer from a lack of variety in that they're all in the same pose and they all look like they're hunchbacks.

The beginning started like it was going to be a nice well-rounded parody but then the lengthy monologue kicked in, and considering the gist of the flash centered on that monologue, it was pretty disappointing. You'd might as well just call it a rant and submit it to YouTube, you'll probably get a lot of positive feedback there.

I think it would've been better if you followed the old "Show, don't tell" rule. It would have been much more enjoyable if you showed everything in that lengthy monologue and expressed it rather than blabber on about it.

The lip sync also needs some work. Have you seen Oney's lip-sync video? He has more than three mouth drawings.

[The Horn Animated: Bagels]

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its oka
2/5
3/5
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2.5/5

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TopHatSquid responds:

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[RWD: 027]

The graphics weren't necessarily good but the idea was okay

[Horn Face]

This was very entertaining.

Despite its simplicity this was still a very entertaining flash. Nice use of bitmaps and a good way of making such a simple idea seem fun.

Deserving of its 3.79

4/5

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[Super Sonic Test]

It seems like it can be something decent if you try to improve it.

*GOOD*

- The music is fitting and sets the mood for the flash.
- The actual sprite animation looked okay.

*BAD*

- The subtitles, and the spelling and grammar errors. It's okay, for example, if you don't use correct grammar in the author's comments, but if it's a subtitle in a flash it's almost a must or it'll look really crappy and unprofessional.
- The default gradients, try to add colors to the background. If you don't know anything about color theory just google "Color Combos" and see which colors go together so you can decide on your color choice.

*OVERALL*

- You show potential as animator, good luck in your future animations.

mastersonic3 responds:

Thanks man, very good review. i will try my best in future animations

[We Are The Champions.]

Good

Binyom responds:

Neat.

[Trick Question]

That was pretty funny, I also liked the C & H art style

[Stick Figures Gone Crazy]

was this inspired by Stick Figures on Crack?

The structure of this flash seems a bit familiar, kind of like a cross between SFoC and asdfmovie, both of which are good for a quick cheap laugh, but probably won't have too much of a lasting effect on people.

If you want to animate, check out chluaid's work or El-Cid's work for inspiration on how to really animate. Stick figures are good for practicing but if you can't be good at animating sticks you can't be good at actually ANIMATING things so!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

100Dylman responds:

yes, it was

[Big Mario]

It seems like a decent idea, but as the reviewer below me said, it was a bit pointless.

Don't get me wrong, I love pointless flashes sometimes but this really wasn't going anywhere, I'm not sure what it was supposed to be made as other than an animation test maybe.

Something I do like about this though is that it has kind of a "retro" feel to it, like an old sprite flash from 2003. Keep in mind though, you don't need to compress the audio that much, in fact since the sound clips were so short you can make it the highest quality possible and it'd still load very fast.

Anyway it's good enough for what it is, good luck, blah blah blah.

[WILLIE D RUMBLE 2]

ChuckSoup pwns

RogersEntertainment responds:

Yea ChuckSoup is My new guideance