MistyE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Willie D Missing part 1]

better.

GOOD:

- intro music. it's very fitting if you're going for a sitcom feel.
- the font you used in the intro. what's it called?
- the walk cycle. i can see you're putting more effort into your cartoons.
- the colors
- i like dexter's hair, and dexter's walk cycle.
- the car drawing

BAD:

- too short
- the stretching of the car
- please don't do one-second blinks anymore. blinks should last no more than 2 or 3 frames.

OVERALL:

- it's good. i like the plotline, instead of man finds dog, it's dog finds man. clever. with more polished animation it can be very good. the walk cycle is a huge step up and you're improving in your animations.

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thanks Buddy and the front its Called Willie D Productions

[Willie D Season 2]

the walk cycle is good but it needs more inbetweens and part of it was just a black silhouette
the storyboarding was a bit off and this could be better if it had dialogue.

the backgrounds were good but they shouldnt change every time willie takes a step

RogersEntertainment responds:

okay

[Willie D Commercial redo]

your artwork has improved. there was one background i saw here that was very detailed and if you tried to make all of your backgrounds as detailed as that one background, you would have a more visually appealing cartoon.

the character designs are a little inconsistent. there is an easy remedy for this. draw one willie d, but make it perfect, and animate based on that perfect willie d you drew.

there wasn't really any animation in this. the drawings were nice, but they need frame-by-frame animation.

this didn't seem to make much sense, lastly. in the contest, you're required to make a commercial about why newgrounds is good. this seemed more like a slideshow than anything else.

good luck!

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thanks MistyEntertainment

[Willie D Productions]

it's your first flash of 2013!

one thing i would recommend fixing is the audio. i think you should just have one music track that plays through the entire flash. for future flashes, you should also put a preloader in the beginning. preloaders generally make your flash look more professional.

for text don't use "Comic Sans MS" - it looks a bit too silly to be taken seriously. Verdana or Impact is a better font.

the drawings at the end were good

RogersEntertainment responds:

Thanks Misty i will try the next one

[Bagel Virus]

I don't know what just happened.

You need to make it more clear what happens in your cartoons because I don't think anybody can understand what's happening unless you tell them.

I'm going to give you a high rating (sort of) because of the improved animation and artwork. It's a step up from your previous cartoons and I'm guessing that's because you have a graphics tablet now. The colors were nice and bright, and just plain colorful which compensates for the confusing plot.

Why is there booing when there's nobody there? We should see a more far away shot of the audience and we should see them boo and make the boo sound with their mouth.

Why does the bagel appear on the guy's plate? This is a rhetorical question. There was no reason for this and this was completely random.

It was good when he stole the guy's bagel but why would he hit him in the face with toast? That was weird.

I liked the song near the end.

Why did you steal the end of one of my deleted scenes? The "hart = broken" thing was basically taken from a deleted scene from Adrellia Village #39.

Good luck.

TheRealNat23 responds:

"I'm going to give you a high rating (sort of) because of the improved animation and artwork. It's a step up from your previous cartoons and I'm guessing that's because you have a graphics tablet now (Yes, I have a Wacom now, as said in the description). The colors were nice and bright, and just plain colorful which compensates for the confusing plot (Thanks, I am learing animation from you actually)."

"Why is there booing when there's nobody there? We should see a more far away shot of the audience and we should see them boo and make the boo sound with their mouth (Sorry, I'll try to do that next time)."

"Why does the bagel appear on the guy's plate? This is a rhetorical question. There was no reason for this and this was completely random (Swiss found a bagel and Swiss stole the bagel so he could have it)."

"It was good when he stole the guy's bagel but why would he hit him in the face with toast (Who hit who in the face with toast, are you talking about the movie scene or the couch scene with the egg?)?"

"Why did you steal the end of one of my deleted scenes? The "hart = broken" thing was basically taken from a deleted scene from Adrellia Village #39 (It was unused, so I just wanted to show it here for something. Plus, we are like a pretend production anyways).

"Good luck (Thanks, same to you with Playback)."

[Game Grumps - Spooning]

There has been an absolutely abundance of Game Grumps animations recently, though they never get old - at least in my opinion.

You chose a good audio clip from Game Grumps to animate. However, this would have been a lot better with some simple touch-ups. The execution of this was done well, though the animation could be better.

A lot of the changes in facial expressions appear choppy, but this could easily be fixed with an inbetween or two. They make the change look much more natural and a lot better than just an abrupt change between drawings.

The character designs could use some work. They look a bit sloppy, but if they were cleaned up, this would be very good.

The way you chose to interpret that part was absolutely hilarious. Unfortunately, the abrupt ending when it ends on that frame lets this cartoon down.

Keep up the good work, and good luck on your future endeavors!

YoYoDawg responds:

A good, honest review. Thank you for the feedback!

[Nailed It]

For your first original animation, this is actually very good. However, it could use a preloader. You can find a Newgrounds preloader in the "NG Flash Loaders" section here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/

They're easy to use, you just stick them in the first frame of your animation and it works.

The character design was simple but effective, as was the frame-by-frame animation, which I will say is very smooth. You did a very good job on the frame-by-frame animation of the nails, and I see you even managed to animate staggers well.

You did a good job on the backgrounds. As simplistic as they are, they fit the mood of the movie.

Overall, the concept was nice and the frame-by-frame animation was smooth and fluent. I look forward to seeing more cartoons from you.

TvoltageToons responds:

Thanks for the kind words, as well as the links for the preloaders, I'll be sure to add them into my animations for this site.
Thanks for the critique as well! I'll be trying to improve as much as I can, and learn about Newgrounds as much as I can, it shouldn't take me too long to learn this site.

[A Simple Update]

This was enjoyable, especially for an update video. I think you could have done a few more drawings to keep the viewer interested, but overall you did a good job and this was actually pretty funny.

You seem to have a good drawing style so I'll fan you. I'm looking forward to seeing cartoons from you in the future!

rattBastardd responds:

Thanks! It means a lot to hear that

[Donkey Kong Parodies 1]

awesome

ToonCastleTV responds:

thx Misty

[Global Warming]

funny, nice animation, 5/5

sweetcommando responds:

thank you