great work
great work
Thanks!
This was well put together, coherent and enjoyable, good job. 4/5
Thanks!
your stuff is always fun & interesting to watch, you have an interesting art style and i'm a fan of your work. 5/5
thanks misty
dat line quality
but ye you have a unique thing going
this is good
i give this 4 keks out of 5
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huzzah! thanks mistyman =D
Obviously you care about your series and you already have a general idea of what you want to accomplish. Like what other people have said: show, don't tell, for a while the plot is exposed entirely through text.
Another thing, if you're gonna have background music, PLEASE choose better songs (Audio Portal has a wide selection of them) and make sure the audio levels aren't peaking.
Reading your responses, it's refreshing seeing that you're taking all of these negative reviews very well, but these would really be much better with less exposition via text, though you said it gets better soon.
And yeah it is a fairly big risk you're taking by uploading these old ones, you're better off polishing these up. Even basic things like text scrolling on a screen could be improved with a nice color scheme, http://colorcombos.com
My only advice is to make these more presentable, you have an interesting story here.
Thanks for the kind words! Yeah, the animations are coming soon, it's just I don't want to jump into them yet without ya'll seeing the rest of the storyline. I've always been a risktaker, so I guess I might as well not change that pattern now. I appreciate your critique. Constructive criticism is beautiful.
This is the best thing I have ever seen.
whoah! thank you so much =D
This is the best thing I have ever seen.
nice
Pretty funny!
I was actually wondering myself if Frozen would make it into KHIII (hope not), I really liked the art and animation in this one, you have a nice style.
Thank you! :D I wouldn't be surprised if it found its way in considering how popular it is, but I hear that it would be too late to include it into the game at this point in development which makes sense.
Interesting series you have here. I really enjoyed watching this - clearly you have everything mapped out, simple but nice character designs, funny writing, and decent animation. I think this could be much better, however, if for the scenes where you used real images for backgrounds, you drew the backgrounds (I could draw a background or two for this if you want), and if you improved the coloring. Some of the color choices don't look as good as they could, y'know what I mean?
I do agree with everything you are saying, but as for the backgrounds part, I cannot change that. I can draw the backgrounds, but the realistic backgrounds are apart of the story. They are meant to be cartoons in real life. Just wait until Part 2 to see why there are realistic backgrounds.
Nice animation, like the expressions.
Thanks.
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