MistyE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Episode 7 Plot of Witnee]

Obviously you care about your series and you already have a general idea of what you want to accomplish. Like what other people have said: show, don't tell, for a while the plot is exposed entirely through text.

Another thing, if you're gonna have background music, PLEASE choose better songs (Audio Portal has a wide selection of them) and make sure the audio levels aren't peaking.

Reading your responses, it's refreshing seeing that you're taking all of these negative reviews very well, but these would really be much better with less exposition via text, though you said it gets better soon.

And yeah it is a fairly big risk you're taking by uploading these old ones, you're better off polishing these up. Even basic things like text scrolling on a screen could be improved with a nice color scheme, http://colorcombos.com

My only advice is to make these more presentable, you have an interesting story here.

stewardhklarlover responds:

Thanks for the kind words! Yeah, the animations are coming soon, it's just I don't want to jump into them yet without ya'll seeing the rest of the storyline. I've always been a risktaker, so I guess I might as well not change that pattern now. I appreciate your critique. Constructive criticism is beautiful.

[Static]

This is the best thing I have ever seen.

Horsenwelles responds:

whoah! thank you so much =D

[Metronomes and Mirrors]

This is the best thing I have ever seen.

morcov responds:

nice

[House Doctor]

Short and sweet, nice character designs and funny joke.

[Why Frozen Won't Be in KH]

Pretty funny!

I was actually wondering myself if Frozen would make it into KHIII (hope not), I really liked the art and animation in this one, you have a nice style.

Elvic responds:

Thank you! :D I wouldn't be surprised if it found its way in considering how popular it is, but I hear that it would be too late to include it into the game at this point in development which makes sense.

[DYK - kingdom hearts.]

haha, pretty funny! Well drawn too.

[Summer Special 2 Part 1]

Interesting series you have here. I really enjoyed watching this - clearly you have everything mapped out, simple but nice character designs, funny writing, and decent animation. I think this could be much better, however, if for the scenes where you used real images for backgrounds, you drew the backgrounds (I could draw a background or two for this if you want), and if you improved the coloring. Some of the color choices don't look as good as they could, y'know what I mean?

DonutStudios responds:

I do agree with everything you are saying, but as for the backgrounds part, I cannot change that. I can draw the backgrounds, but the realistic backgrounds are apart of the story. They are meant to be cartoons in real life. Just wait until Part 2 to see why there are realistic backgrounds.

[Who Put You On The Planet]

Nice animation, like the expressions.

Greasegoat responds:

Thanks.

[Mine Escape]

I've been following for your stuff for a while now - I really like your style! The frame-by-frame animation here looks excellent, although it's a bit choppy at points, and the color scheme is nice as usual. The backgrounds seem to be drawn in another program while the animation's done in Flash, which looks pretty interesting.

I enjoyed this.

[MMT - Beans on toast]

The artwork and the backgrounds are very nice, I like your use of gradients here - a lot of people misuse them, though you used them correctly here, and it really adds to the backgrounds. The character designs were also pretty good.

I think some parts of the animation could've been improved if you added some easing to your tweens. Tweens are alright, but I think they look much better if you use easing.

Nice job!